Persuasive paragraph- Ulises Zamora

  The Watertown Middle School is a very unhealthy and non-nutrition school that could get students on a bad eating habit. To start off, everyday eighth grade students go down to have lunch at a very early time so it makes them feel like they are having breakfast and then the sixth grade goes down and have lunch at a very late time and they can get sick from waiting to long to eat. This shows breakfast or in fact any meal is not supposed to be greasy pizza and tacos and salt filled foods this can bring high cholesterol and major heart problems.That's why bringing in healthy vending machines is a very good idea. Healthy vending machines is a very impressive idea because not only will the students of Watertown Middle School get the food at any time of the day but they will have many options that are healthy and can help them grow. the evidence given shows that not only will the students have the choice of what to eat but what they eat can help them grow. Lastly, teenagers are at a point in their life's of rapid growth and the food that the vending machines will provide them with can help them with this growth. This is explaining that teenagers are growing up at this point in their lives and that the healthy vending machines can help them get the nutrition they need. The Watertown Middle School is a very unhealthy school but with the hep and support of the healthy vending machines we can make this school a better place.