- www.google.com
-http://www.vendingmachinesunlimited.com/
-http://teenadvice.ygoy.com/nutrition-for-teenagers-why-do-teenagers-need-nutrients/
-http://www.medicinenet.com/script/main/art.asp?articlekey=10054
-http://kidshealth.org/teen/food_fitness/nutrition/vitamins_minerals.html
Sunday, June 19, 2011
Ideal Solution
An ideal solution that we have is to get on the same level with all of our detractors and also overcome our problems. Success in this project means that we got the vending machines in the school and everyone in the school is happy. The changes that have to be made is the vending machines have to be in the school and working and ethe teachers and principle need to be on the same page as us and also the school will become a more healthy enviorment. These are the things that can take us to where we need to be. To be the best dosent mean success to us it is to make other people happy is succes.
Saturday, June 18, 2011
Problems/ Resolutions
Some things that might get in the way of our success.
Problems
Cost of Machines- The cost could get in the way of our cause because Vending machines are very expensive and our school might need to use the money that we still have on other things
Teachers that disagree- Teachers might start a strike because the school has used the money that they still had to pay for these vending machines. But really the teachers will not be harmed by the buying of the vending machines.
The principle- He might not like the idea of the vending machine machine getting put in the school.
School comittee- They might disagree with our idea and deny it.
Resolutions
- We can try and lower the prices of the machines and maybe even get a donation.
- We can talk to the teachers and try to explain to them that there paycheck wont be affected by the vending machines.
- We can persuasive the priciple into likeing our idea and to agreewith us.
Problems
Cost of Machines- The cost could get in the way of our cause because Vending machines are very expensive and our school might need to use the money that we still have on other things
Teachers that disagree- Teachers might start a strike because the school has used the money that they still had to pay for these vending machines. But really the teachers will not be harmed by the buying of the vending machines.
The principle- He might not like the idea of the vending machine machine getting put in the school.
School comittee- They might disagree with our idea and deny it.
Resolutions
- We can try and lower the prices of the machines and maybe even get a donation.
- We can talk to the teachers and try to explain to them that there paycheck wont be affected by the vending machines.
- We can persuasive the priciple into likeing our idea and to agreewith us.
Persuasive paragraph-Ulises Zamora
Watertown Middle School
C/o: Ulises Zamora
68 Waverly Ave
Watertown Ma, 02472
May 20, 2011
Global Vending Group
2143 Union Road
West Seneca, NY 14224
To whom it may concern,
My name is Ulises Zamora I am a student at Watertown Middle School. I am currently working on a project for my humanities class. I am writing to you because I have a very big goal to get vending machines in our school. I am doing this because the students of the Watertown middle school have lunch at a very early time and they have to wait until they get home to eat again. The biggest concern that I have is that students here could get gastritis (An inflammation of the lining of the stomach and can be fatal) from waiting so long to eat.
Global vending group you can help our school be a more nutritious and healthy society. You can help us in a very considerate manner by donating a few vending machines or maybe giving us a good deal for a few. You can help the students at this school be healthier.
Thank you for your consideration and time; it would be a pleasure if you could help us. We hope that this has hit you in a good manner and have a nice day.
Sincerely,
Ulises Zamora
Watertown Middle School Humanities Student
Watertown middle school
C/o: Ulises Zamora
68 Waverly Ave
Watertown Ma, 02472
May 20, 2011
Global Vending Group
2143 Union Road
West Seneca, NY 14224
To whom it may concern,
My name is Ulises Zamora I am a student at Watertown Middle School. I am currently working on a project for my humanities class. I am writing to you because I have a very big goal to get vending machines in our school. I am doing this because the students of the Watertown middle school have lunch at a very early time and they have to wait until they get home to eat again. The biggest concern that I have is that students here could get gastritis (An inflammation of the lining of the stomach and can be fatal) from waiting so long to eat.
Global vending group you can help our school be a more nutritious and healthy society. You can help us in a very considerate manner by donating a few vending machines or maybe giving us a good deal for a few. You can help the students at this school be healthier.
Thank you for your consideration and time; it would be a pleasure if you could help us. We hope that this has hit you in a good manner and have a nice day.
Sincerely,
Ulises Zamora
Watertown Middle School Humanities Student
Watertown middle school
Wednesday, June 15, 2011
Persuasive Letter-Rafael De souza
Watertown Middle School
C/O: Rafael De Souza
68 Waverly Ave
Watertown MA 02472
Aldaar Vending
146 Division Place
Hackensack NJ 07601
Mike Ehrentreu
To whom it may concern,
My name is Rafael De Souza; I am a student at Watertown Middle School. I am currently working on a project for my humanities class. I am writing to you because I have a very big goal to get vending machines in my school. I’m doing this because kids in WMS are getting lunch very early and then kids are getting sick and going home.
Aldar Vending you can help our school Watertown Middle School be a more healthy society. You Can help us in a very considerate manner by giving us some vending machines and to help our school be more healthy.
Thank you for your consideration and times; it would be a pleasure if you could help us. We hope that this has hit you in a good manner and have in a nice day.
Sincerely,
Rafael De Souza
Watertown Middle School Humanities student
Watertown Middle School
C/O: Rafael De Souza
68 Waverly Ave
Watertown MA 02472
Aldaar Vending
146 Division Place
Hackensack NJ 07601
Mike Ehrentreu
To whom it may concern,
My name is Rafael De Souza; I am a student at Watertown Middle School. I am currently working on a project for my humanities class. I am writing to you because I have a very big goal to get vending machines in my school. I’m doing this because kids in WMS are getting lunch very early and then kids are getting sick and going home.
Aldar Vending you can help our school Watertown Middle School be a more healthy society. You Can help us in a very considerate manner by giving us some vending machines and to help our school be more healthy.
Thank you for your consideration and times; it would be a pleasure if you could help us. We hope that this has hit you in a good manner and have in a nice day.
Sincerely,
Rafael De Souza
Watertown Middle School Humanities student
Watertown Middle School
Persuasive Letter-Dean D'Agostino
Watertown middle school
68 Waverley Ave
C/o Dean D’Agostino
Vending world
10225 Philadelphia Ct.
Rancho Cucamonga, CA. 91730
To whom it may concern,
My name is Dean D’Agostino I go to Watertown Middle School. I am working on a really important project for my humanities class. I am writing this letter to you because I want to get vending machines in my school. I want to get the machines in the school because the school gives us lunch at a very early time and it feels like were eating breakfast and then we have to wait until we get home to eat again. I am scared that the students could get into bad habits of eating and form a bad eating disorder.
Vending world you can help us by donating some vending machines or giving us a good deal on some. Lets say a student gets hungry and we had lunch already, then we have to wait 4 hours until we get to see food again. And that will be a distraction during class if we have vending machines then we would be able to grab a snack and go on with our day.
It would be great if you could give us deals or help us out in any way shape or form.
I would like to get a letter back with your response. Thank you for taking your time to read this letter your time is much appreciated.
Sincerely
Dean D’Agostino
Watertown Middle School
Watertown middle school humanities Student
68 Waverley Ave
C/o Dean D’Agostino
Vending world
10225 Philadelphia Ct.
Rancho Cucamonga, CA. 91730
To whom it may concern,
My name is Dean D’Agostino I go to Watertown Middle School. I am working on a really important project for my humanities class. I am writing this letter to you because I want to get vending machines in my school. I want to get the machines in the school because the school gives us lunch at a very early time and it feels like were eating breakfast and then we have to wait until we get home to eat again. I am scared that the students could get into bad habits of eating and form a bad eating disorder.
Vending world you can help us by donating some vending machines or giving us a good deal on some. Lets say a student gets hungry and we had lunch already, then we have to wait 4 hours until we get to see food again. And that will be a distraction during class if we have vending machines then we would be able to grab a snack and go on with our day.
It would be great if you could give us deals or help us out in any way shape or form.
I would like to get a letter back with your response. Thank you for taking your time to read this letter your time is much appreciated.
Sincerely
Dean D’Agostino
Watertown Middle School
Watertown middle school humanities Student
Tuesday, June 14, 2011
Detractors
Some of the people that might disagree with our cause.
School Committee- they might not like our idea because the school is in a low budget crisis and they might need to use the money for other things
Teachers- some teachers might disagree with our cause because they might think that they will be getting paid less from the expenses that the school will have from buying these vending machines
Some parents- These parents might think that in the vending machines there might junk food instead of healthy food.
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